Color Pencil

Group

• White pops 
• Red pops
• Snow globe pops
• snow flakes
• Perception of depth
• shadows
• shapes
• more layering of colors

Personal 

I think my #1 problem was that my initial drawing wasn't that strong. The shapes are kind of awkward in contrast to the background and there is something off with the snow globe. On the snow globe the colors look chunky and show no transition between one color to another. I also think that I could have used layering more effectively and mix the colors more fluidly together. The colors pop well but could be toned down a little because its to the point where the background becomes distracting. I do like the blues in the background. The snowmen are messy but I do like some of the detail that I put into the scarves and hats. Overall this isn't my best piece.